文/ 李思恬
There are four people in my family, my parents, my sister and me. This is my mom, she is 31 years old, she has long hair, big eyes and small nose, and she seems very beautiful, she is quiet .She likes music and she sings very well, she is our “home doctor”. We love her very much,do you like her? Then, I tell you about my dad. My dad is our “home driver”, he is 39 years old, he has short hair, big eyes and small nose, and he is cool! My dad likes sports and he does sports everyday. He is humorous, my dad gives us a lot of fun and jokes, everyone in my family always laugh and laugh. Yes! We are really very happy! My sister is 6 years old, she is a pretty girl, and she is very cute and lovely. My name is Li Sitian, I’m a beautiful girl from Kaifaqu No.1 primary school, I like music and I speak English well. Oh, I ‘m quiet, too, just like my mom.
I love everybody in my family, we love each other.
教师点评:四年级的孩子能用简单的英语句子,描写出家人详细的人物特征,好一个happy family!值得鼓励和学习。
(作者:河南省安阳高新区第一小学四(2)班 指导老师 赵涛)